In My Life

Creed Short

21 Feb, 2012 05:31 PM
My life is coming to an end
Because my feelings will not bend

My love for you is still strong
But you said it was all wrong

I pray to God my soul to take
I try to be happy but it's fake

The thought of you hurts my heart
And now we must forever be apart

My heart and soul was given to you
You marked my life like a tattoo

I see the vultures picking apart my life
So now it ends, this will have to suffice

They say everything works out in the end
But my heart will never mend

Everything must one day die
Now it is my time to say goodbye
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Shashu says:
20 Dec, 2012 12:03 PM

My life is coming to an endBecause my feelings will not bendMy love for you is still strongBut you said it was all wrongI pray to God my soul to takeI try to be happy but it's fakeThe thought of you hurts my heartAnd now we must forever be apartMy heart and soul was given to youYou marked my life like a tattooI see the vultures picking apart my lifeSo now it ends, this will have to sufficeThey say everything works out in theendBut my heart will never mendEverything must one day dieNow it is my time to say goodbye

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fatima says:
21 Dec, 2012 02:33 AM

so nice and deep words i love that poems bec'z its really nice

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The fallen1 says:
05 Jan, 2013 04:36 PM

I felt the pain

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Akira says:
07 Jan, 2013 02:44 AM

i cried... i can relate in every word and syllable....

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Maata says:
08 Jan, 2013 08:35 PM

i cried so loud every words hurt my feelin

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jeff says:
27 Feb, 2013 06:35 AM

I felt a pain in every word you said this happened to me yesterday

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