She Finds A Knife
UnbreakableHeart7
28 Jan, 2014 08:59 PMShe finds a knife, Cuts real deep. Doesn't understand, The life she could keep. She feels trapped, Inside her mind. In misery She tries to find. She tried for peace, Tried for love And one day hoped To look down from above. Yet she finds a knife And cuts real deep. Finds a cliff And wants to leap. But she stops And looks down. "Is this what I want?" She starts to frown. She stares at her wrists, The scars fairly new. She sits down and cries "What did I do?" She takes a deep breath, Closes her eyes. Thinks of the past, All the hatred and lies. Once again, angry she is, She swallows a great lump. Runs toward the edge, fast as she could, Finally deciding to jump.
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Post a Comment08 Sep, 2014 12:44 AM
This is really beautiful, I'm almost crying, I wish you, my dear,that you can step away from the cliff, life's worth it. I know myself that sometimes you want to run and do the final step, but there are moments in life that are worth not to do it. The moments someone shows you their love for you, hold on to these and don't give up, unbreakable heart!
16 Dec, 2014 02:55 AM
"What did I do?" This is beautiful. It shows the final choice that shouldn't have to be made, but always is. Though I know it's besides the point, it also dances across your tongue and flows across your mind like a poem should. Poems like these give new meanings to life, meanings that could never be brought from a poem that doesn't capture this one choice.
24 Dec, 2014 01:36 AM
I'm tearing up this is so beautiful! I love this so much! It's the perfect poem, and idk it's just amazing! Keep writing :* ~Madeline
31 Dec, 2014 04:50 PM
I completely understand this poem more than Id like to admit...sometimes things just cut you so deep that moving forward isn't an option...
12 Mar, 2015 01:51 AM
I really like this poem it explains how i feel at times :)