The Darkest Side - Darkpalm21
The Darkpalm21
23 Jul, 2014 01:37 AMOver my deepest flesh There is something I hide behind my smile Ever since my sufferings started... At First its too hard to pretend that everything's alright and I taught that if I can't manage to keep these thing inside everything will be remain miserable... My faith,hope,love or even everything I own will eventually void by these thing and turn everything in to guilt and hatred that I never ever wanted to feel... Because I already done with that side... But its keeps pursuing behind... I've to resist these darkest side Before its turn my way again to its glide... The Side that I hated most.... Is always inside trying a countless attempts to bring me in the bottomless hole.... Just like a cave that's has no escape... Or an illness that's has no cure... It's always there waiting to your weakest days.... When everyone turning back on you... When everyone judge you... And when everyone blame you... The Calling of that Dark side you always tried to blur... That's Whispering "Revenged"...
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Post a Comment15 Sep, 2014 02:37 AM
i think this is lovely, but your grammar could be A LOT better, in the most constructive way ever, i would like to tell you that your tense also changes.
thankyou xxxxxx
29 Oct, 2014 06:13 PM
It great need a grammer improvent but still great!