I know that it will be my last
Derek
03 Oct, 2014 05:56 AMShe smells like the sands of time And is funny without ever being mean I know that she's a dime But I can't stop this feeling I got my bottle of Jack Then there's a sudden bleeding In this abrasive room of black I create a certain kind of seeing Maybe I should care But shouldn't every human being Why do I find myself in such a stare such a glare When it's just her concentrating She said she is there Because of the lack of caring I say that I'm here Because of the lack of caring She said that that is life I said that that is strife Had been shown at the end of this knife I know that I must keep my bearing But that is shown by the scars that I'm wearing Pain has a way of escaping But she has a way to draw it To manipulate it To construct it To create an impersonal amount of anticipation about it A book couldn't copy this feeling Nor a file Nor a story The empathy bursting from my soul couldn't comprehend the very existence of the hurt held within this girls' heart waiting to flood my incoherent mind just from this single unbroken glance I know that it will be my last
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Post a Comment22 Apr, 2015 10:50 AM
I was looking for some words to write a tune for as part of my college courses and would like to use this poem, would that be ok.
22 Nov, 2015 03:25 AM
All yours.
25 Nov, 2016 11:16 AM
You're really good at this. May I ask how old you are?
03 Jan, 2017 03:01 AM
21.
16 Jun, 2017 02:44 PM
wow.. probably the greatest. i write too and i was wondering if i can send u some of my poems..and help m because im still growing.
14 Jul, 2017 05:02 AM
We are all friends here, send away.