The Open Window
Parry Boparai
05 Jun, 2011 09:03 AMThe window of our memories is still open, My mind is still thinking about you and hoping, Those days can still be recalled but not you, Give me a chance to prove that my love is true, You left me a long time before, My boat is still in ocean finding its shore, The long nights are sleepless, I am having your and just yours stress, Now I stood, where we met first time, I am here but yours no sign, The question which makes me weak is "was my love weak?", My condition now is a fish without stream, My world of dreams is shattering, A good reward for my love from you I am getting, Do me a favor stay happy wherever are you like birds on trees, If you still miss me than please come and close the open window of our memories! ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||PARRY BOPARAI||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Tags: Love, Heartbroken
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Post a Comment30 Jun, 2011 06:52 AM
hey. i love the poem. its amazing. it kinda realates to me in different ways. but this is good. i loved it.
03 Jul, 2011 08:24 AM
@Rayaz :-
Hi. Thanks a lot .... i'll be posting poems,,,,,,,,,,, once again thanks for liking friend......
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08 Oct, 2012 02:21 PM
nyc poem and rhyming themes keep it up!! bro success is no far away its nearer to u but u have to recognize oppurtunity