Forever incomplete
SweetToxicDeadlylover
10 Jul, 2011 11:12 PMWhen we swore to never be apart I never knew that it was just me You are still in my heart and soul You have my whole heart I'll forever be just a half waiting to be whole My love in vain You don't even understand this pain Without you it's like The day without sun Rain without clouds A kid without parents A pool without water A rainbow without color Thunder without lightning A laugh without a smile Family with no love Night without the moon or stars You are still whole and happy I'm forced to still love and miss you There is still no words to describe it Without you I'll always be incomplete
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Post a Comment31 Jul, 2011 06:05 PM
Thank you so much for writin this. It describes my life and what just happened to me recently. I hate when its just you doing the loving. I hate when the other person is happy and goes on with their life but you're stuck in this black pit of despair and loneliness.
04 Aug, 2011 09:08 PM
Very good writing. I know exactly how you feel
15 Jul, 2013 07:24 AM
I feel this pain. I loved her and after 6 years she never even said good bye. She did say hello to her freedom though. Now I go through my days with a broken heart and the memory of the girl she swore she was. Thinking about what we could've been, and wishing she was still by my side. I still love her, and I still miss her. Thank you for sharing your poem with the rest of us who have also lost half of our hearts to the ones we loved so much...