Lonliness
Elle.rose7
03 Oct, 2011 07:56 AMSee the girl Standing in the corner No words, always quiet A loner No one to see No friends to care As she stands On the edge of despair Her body screams no Her heart pleads yes What will she do? No one knows yet Won't someone save her? It'd be easy if they tried The little things she needs Like a shoulder on which to cry An apology to her parents And a plea to die Into divers position She's made up her mind No one will see her No one will care Even if they did all they would see is A shell of a girl that is no longer there
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Post a Comment27 Mar, 2012 05:23 PM
This is a very good piece
29 Mar, 2012 03:28 PM
This is true... I believe in it, a great piece of poem
31 Mar, 2012 03:47 AM
This poem is like made for me i actualy am like that... great work , i love it [^u^]
20 Apr, 2012 05:44 PM
that sounds like me ! love it
09 Jan, 2013 05:36 PM
This poem was painful, I loved it
15 Apr, 2013 05:37 PM
nice poem :))
25 Aug, 2014 12:09 AM
she is just another angel that this cruel world has broken </3
10 Mar, 2015 12:54 PM
So sad, this made me cry. we all need a friend.
23 Mar, 2015 06:01 PM
Nyc... i lyk it
26 Oct, 2015 02:52 AM
I really like this . I'm
26 Oct, 2015 02:55 AM
I wish that I cried .... the pain of my depression has seemingly dulled all my thoughts and senses ... minus when I cut .
I love this .
You're very gifted .